The_Cobalt_Swordsman

Listen up, everyone! I've decided to rework the prologue chapter for my story. The reason why is that it felt dry and not as engaging as I expected it to be.  So, this is something much of a step up from the original draft.  Granted it might need a little rework, but I'll leave the judging up to you guys. Hope you guys enjoy it!

The_Cobalt_Swordsman

...............Annnnnd its done.
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The_Cobalt_Swordsman

Listen up, everyone! I've decided to rework the prologue chapter for my story. The reason why is that it felt dry and not as engaging as I expected it to be.  So, this is something much of a step up from the original draft.  Granted it might need a little rework, but I'll leave the judging up to you guys. Hope you guys enjoy it!

The_Cobalt_Swordsman

...............Annnnnd its done.
Reply