The Final Rose Community

Hey everyone! You should check out this story, it's intriguing with a mix of modern and older language. Has a STUNNING cover and interesting description. And the plot is super good! I've read a few chapters and plan to do more. You should check it out as well and drop a few votes and comments for them! 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/323868120?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=The_Final_Rose&wp_originator=zp1mmy36dGnepuSxuvcm4xjqY5HvsBPMDXz1OwmW3RX7m4d9Kdcw%2B1FW3Urxytm8%2FZX6v%2Fbquah3gYJmiFDQLJe4b5Jj438UkiEmbxm3kntm9sTAdVLBsFmh0pONiUgl 

@CrysTravel2019
          Aliens obsession
          I love the story so far, it's unique and compelling as hell. The straight jump into the plot without the long drawn intro, it's a good hook. Never been a huge fan of smut but I think this was well done with the story. The first interaction may have been a little too rushed and I think for readers it'd be better to be more drawn out, if it is the focus of the book. The only problem I have with your writing style is how formal it is, making it for a harsher read. Certain small details such as "I am" to "I'm" can significantly change the speakers tone. Yesele's quick mood change from afraid to cocky was a little surprising. I enjoyed it tho and might enjoy it a little more if you catch my drift, good job.

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Echo in the wind 
          @strawberry1d
          Review: The title and cover resonate together; the style of the text, and sharpness in the background details coincide with one another. The book blurb does provide context to the initial chapter of the book; it provides a preview into later scenes of the story. The main theme of the story revolves around depression, thus the characters are developed around this subject. Descriptions relating to the setting of the scene taking place in the first chapter were lackluster. The initial scene in the first chapter focuses on dialogue between character; for character development. The scene provides significant insight to the entire theme of the story; one that will recur. The plot revolves around the mental health of someone who is famous; one that may be intriguing, as the mental health of renowned peoples does not receive much coverage in general media. Grammar does not require significant changes, the text is concise, as it is. My enjoyment was rather low, simply because the story was not interesting to me. 
          
          

The cursed bond
          @Denyefa4
          Review: The title of the book is not overly descriptive; it is still closely related to the main premise of the story. The text containing the title of the book on the cover appears out-of-place; the text margins are not centered. The font does not appear to resonate with the colors and scenery depicted in the background. The book blurb provides a significant amount of context to the story, especially to readers starting from the first chapter. The aforementioned chapter maintains a focus on character development; the main character’s personality is being revealed. The focus on character development can be seen in the second chapter as well, with the introduction of multiple new characters, and foreshadowing as to how they may interact in the future, based on current circumstances. Plot is entertaining, due to the constant use of dialogue to develop the character personalities. Grammar could definitely be improved; especially within dialogue. Many sentences in the dialogue are far too long, to be read without punctuation.
          

The girl from the mire 
          @pualjohnnelson
          
          
          Review: The title does not require an overly descriptive phrase; three words would suffice. The art style and the text are not consistent throughout the entirety of the book cover; the contrast between a highly detailed skull, and a rough human silhouette is far too great to be included. The same principle applies to the detailed city and grass. The title within the cover is in an odd position, along with the human silhouette alongside the title. The book blurb is descriptive enough to the point where it follows the general theme of the story, but a self-reference near the end seems redundant; the rest of the blurb in itself describes a mysterious environment. The first chapter of the story describes the setting of the ‘mire.’ Details relating to the character’s personality are omitted at this point in the story; the setting is being developed. The exact point in time at which the character enters the nightmarish land is not clear. The moments in which the character experiences a sudden outburst of emotions seem entirely random. Overall, the descriptions of occurring events are detailed significantly. However, the descriptions and concepts introduced in the first chapter, would likely benefit from added punctuation; the text will be compendious

Announcement: WE WILL BE MAKING A READING COMMUNITY WITH MORE AWARDS
          Sorry, wanted to get your attention. We will be making a reading community book in which we read your pieces and provide more in depth advice as well as future awards for writing and graphics. They WILL be on time this time and better executed. Several new people will be joining us and with our trail and error we have learned. So stay tuned for later this month or early January!

Username: @I0Raven0I
          Book title: Sad Poetry 
          Review: 
          Just wow, truly such a powerful poem. It was beautifully written with an incredible flow to it and I loved the theme and story of it. Again, so so powerful of a poem. I recommend all to read this one <3
          

Username: @KaylaAdeline
          Book title: Soft eyes, jagged nails 
          Review: 
          I was pleasantly surprised at the ending and honestly really loved the theme behind it. There's some bits I wish were smoother and a better cover, but overall a great piece. Your poem titles are all cohesive and I love that you had a poem as your book description, might have to steal that idea! Well done. 
          
          

Username: @ScarletNostalgia 
          Book title: Just poetry 
          Review: 
          It was short but it flowed beautifully. I've never fancied short poems but it flowed and rhymed perfectly and was a short, little, sweet thing that I quite enjoyed.