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This is a Sneak Peek to a book I'm writing! Tell me what you think?
Anna huffed in annoyance as her older brother Sam was ignoring her obnoxious singing, loud claps and stomping, trying to urge him to get ready and for him to get in the vehicle, they were going on a trip to some Asian jungle. She don't know what it was called, Sam wouldn't tell her.
"Anna Miley Reitman! Stop pestering your brother! He'll get in the car when he so pleases!" Ah, mom. Always taking the side of the 21 year old. "Go up to your room till he's ready, or you're not going at all!" Anna nodded, feeling ashamed at her accused childish behavior.
"Anna! Get your ass in the car!" Anna awoke to hear her brother yell before being berated by their mother for using foul language.
"Coming!" Anna said, "Took you long enough..." she muttered while walking towards the front entrance with her fully packed suitcase. Looking at Sam, she notices he was picking his nose and hadn't realized her presence.
Anna snorted when her brother snapped out of his trance and noticed her, doing a ninja-like pose. "What the fu-"
"Language!"
"Sorry Mom!" Anna looked at Sam with disappointment when he had a shit-eating-grin upon his features while apologizing to Mrs. Reitman, also known as... The Mom. Those words sent shivers down her spine, not that she didn't like Susan (I mean, Mom). It's just that she could be scary sometimes... (Don't think about him...)
Anna shivered once more before turning towards her elder brother, she liked calling him that to make him feel old. "You finally ready?" Anna dragged out her words, bending her knees to add more emphasis.