@JessicaWright4 Sure, I just read the first chapter and your male body language is really good, it expresses his feelings without get to emotional which from reading that chapter really goes with the character.
To answer your question, no not many males do the snapping there finger as you described unless it is a joke.
Overall a very good peace of writing well done, and there to go hope I helped sorry if I didn't Iv never done this before.