I don’t know why, but people never seem to vote on wattpad, and even less comment. I guess I shouldn’t talk because usually forget, but i know how it feels because I want people to engage too. One thing I’d suggest is separating the dialogue in your stories from the main paragraphs, it should be it’s own thing. Like this:
“Something.” Y/n said.
Or whatever. I find it easier to read and I think that’s the proper way to do it. But I know not everyone does it like that so it’s up to you.