Hi fellow peoples. I know I don't have many followers but those of y'all who do follow me I wanted to ask for an opinion. I created this prophecy for my book Diary of a Demigod which I may or may not be rewriting . . . again, and I wanted for y'all to see if it was good. Please, please, please give me critique even if you believe it needs only the slightest change. I want this prophecy to be perfect, well not perfect because there's not such thing, but as good as it can get.
So here it is:
The four corners of the world
All together by death
Shall meet in beyond the abyss
By the power of Earth, Water, Fire, and Air
The feathered daggers, a moonlit scepter,
The poisoned lash, and an all-seeing eye
Will come in hand for triumph or ruin
Over the Just One who created it all
The 24th month of the 51st year will break to the fall
And only one is bound to survive this mighty haul.
Thank you. :)