The_Pie_Is_A_Lie

Chapter 6 of Chell's second playthrough is finished. And oh boy is this mind fuckery lmao. I hope this won't explode brains.....

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@The_Pie_Is_A_Lie it wqs gold, It was gold.
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The_Pie_Is_A_Lie

My story Chell's second Playthrough is going better than I thought. It's so much fun to write too, especially the chapter I just uploaded. Chell finally found out about the pause menu. The thing is I feel watched now whenever I pause Portal 2. Lmao

The_Pie_Is_A_Lie

There are not going to be many updates for next couple of weeks. I have to many projects that need to be finished, because otherwise they just keep laying around unfinished. I don't want that. So sorry for the inactivity.
          
          Also, remember my Aperture Highschool story? I know, it isn't finished, but it will be. Someday. Anyway, I'm going to fix some errors like grammar and stuff, because the story deserves good English. Lmao. So that's probably the only thing that will get updated, but the next few weeks are going to be very quiet. But after I've finished what I've begun (mare then 4 months ago) you guys are going to be able to read what've been working on.
          
          Thanks for your patience guys.
          b0i   

The_Pie_Is_A_Lie

Personally I think my way of writing isn't the best. It's not bad, but it could be better. What I love most are the ideas. I only have trouble with writing them down so it becomes a story. (I especially have trouble because English is my second language) 
          But I'm not too bad, if I say so myself. Now, I would really like to hear what you guys think and if there's anything I should change, pls let me know and I'll look into it. 
          
          Thanks guys
          b0i