@Polu1998 First of all congratulations on your new story and thankyou for the invitation... I did read it...it's off to a great and interesting start and I'm sure that the result would be phenomenal...
However, I am sorry but it just didn't click with me yet... actually stories with a dark theme like murder take a while to click with me...I'll surely follow up once few chapters are posted...it helps me stay a little sane...
All the very best from my side...
I hope I did not offend you though...it's just that stories high on emo take a toll on me so I'd rather have a little more of the plot to hold on to otherwise I go into subspace thinking too much and too dark which inadvertently affects my mood and expression...
All the very best...
Loads of love
TheRuthlessLover