Thebreadplush

Honestly? The odds and evens isn't even that good or exciting to write,I thought I would enjoy writing it but I'm not... hopefully I'll finish it later.

Nahfacestayaface

Some constructive criticism that I can give for both of your books, outside of the fact that they’re both well written and really good reads. Is that spacing really makes a difference when reading as well as the types of marks (quotations, apostrophes, etc.) And making the story slower, not in pace, more so in how the characters express their interest for each other in the beginning. Like starting at the surface level of them individually and then slowly diving deeper so that the readers get to know the Mc and ml along side each other. If you get what I mean. Outside of that reading both books so far has been very interesting and enjoyable. I can see you getting really far lowkey.

Thebreadplush

@Nahfacestayaface Thank you for your feedback,it really makes a great difference in how I view things. I appreciate it and I'm glad you otherwise enjoyed both stories <3
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Thebreadplush

Currently done with The agreement,I wrote all of it on an impulsive high and the refusal to go to bed. How that it's done the next book in the series will be out. Drum roll please! The odds(and the evens) featuring two characters from the last book. Hope anyone who finds it likes it :3