Some constructive criticism that I can give for both of your books, outside of the fact that they’re both well written and really good reads. Is that spacing really makes a difference when reading as well as the types of marks (quotations, apostrophes, etc.) And making the story slower, not in pace, more so in how the characters express their interest for each other in the beginning. Like starting at the surface level of them individually and then slowly diving deeper so that the readers get to know the Mc and ml along side each other. If you get what I mean. Outside of that reading both books so far has been very interesting and enjoyable. I can see you getting really far lowkey.