Thecriticalreader

Hey everyone! Shameless self promotion time. I recently stared a new story that is in much need of some constructive criticism.  If you are interested, check it out, tell me what you would change, you know whatever, I don't care (YES I DO CARE I CARE VERY MUCH). So if you're up to it, I would be mad appreciative.  Thanks!

Thecriticalreader

Hey everyone! Shameless self promotion time. I recently stared a new story that is in much need of some constructive criticism.  If you are interested, check it out, tell me what you would change, you know whatever, I don't care (YES I DO CARE I CARE VERY MUCH). So if you're up to it, I would be mad appreciative.  Thanks!