Theeyesofthebeholder

@LittleGurlLost Why is it rated R? I would love to help you, I just want a little more backround information before I committ to anything.

Bryttany

@theeyesofthebeholder have you uploaded your your sequel to being miss invisible 
          the book was really good it had me in my emotions bad

Theeyesofthebeholder

Hello there! I'm glad you liked Becoming Miss Visible! As for your question, no I have not uploaded the sequel yet because of a technical glitch with my computer. The first five chapters should be up within the next couple of days with the rest to follow at some point! Thanks for your dedication!
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strength0629

Hi Theeyesofthebeholder!  Thank you so much for fanning, voting and adding Runaway Bride to your reading list.  Your support means so much to me.  I read your comment and thank you, I'm so glad you like the story.  Have a good night!

LittleGurlLost

This is a mafia story. This story has blood, gore, violence, guns, and references to religion, drugs, alcohol, language and sexual behavior. The mob is never a clean thing so this story won't be either. Besides all of that, this story depicts the love of two people in a crime centered, violent, shady, and money hungry world. Don't expect them to fall in love at first sight because that's not how it happens in life. 
          To sum it all up, its basically really graphic.

FatherSonHolyGhost

Hey. I replied to one of your disscusion boards and I would really love working with you. I'm a Christian too and I think that your a Christian only strenghtens my desire to work with you! My name is Victoriana and I've written Magic Girlhttp://www.wattpad.com/5097523-magic-girl but I'm in need of an editor, badly. Thank you so much, hope to hear back from you in the future.

LittleGurlLost

@Theeyesofthebeholder  I was just looking at your discussion in the wattpad editors club, and i'm in need of an editor and i was hoping you could help me with that. Here's the deal, i need an editor for the minor spelling. puntuation, and grammar mistakes that i might miss. I also i need someone to point out where i am lacking and help me enhance it or tell me if i am adding a bunch of useless information that needs to be removed. I dont want the enhancements to be done for me but i want to be guided so that i ll improve unless you feel like there's something that needs to be added then feel free to add it but let me know that its there. If you can do that then I would love for you to be my permanent editor.
          Here's a little bit about my story, Its R rated because of the graphic nature, so if that offends you then just let me know and i can find someone else. Its a mafia story so it will contain a lot of things that you might not want to deal with. I have the first three chapters already written up but they need to be edited so i can send them to you if you are willing to do it.  If your interested please let me know and i will be happy to send them to you. Thanks I would really appreciate it.