Thefirstnoelle1211

@TheresNo_Rush it's ok I defiantly understand

No problem, I just trying to help. I had no intention of offending you at all. I was low on time and was being blunt, straight to the point about your story. And in that bluntness I did not clearly point out your strengths. Which is the well kept pacing and descriptions of your characters. As well as your sense of humor. Your writing itself isn't bad. Its in fact fairly good. 
          
          I hope you understand
          
          -Desting
          
          PS Sorry for any errors in this message, cell phone sucks >.<

@TheresNo_Rush thank you and idk if I will or not

Since my critic offended you as a writer, I apologize. I also deleted the offending critic since it was only right to do so. I hope you continue writing ^__^
          
          -Desting

hi ellie belly