Theflauntist

new chapter has been posted go and read it!!

preetiborana

Heyyy sweetie am a new author and I want you to read my book with all your heart and give me your opinion. I do not want vfv or cfc If you like it then give my book a chance. Otherwise, no worry♡
          
          My book is about an Indian arranged marriage whose culture is Rajasthani in which a 28 year old boy is Shaurya Rajvanshi a 21 year old girl piya thakur. There is an age gap in this book♡
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/385051325?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=preetiborana

preetiborana

@Theflauntist thanyouuuu sweetheart  
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sorceryofdying

I have a question, bruv, Are you Punjabi? like genuinely asking, don't take offense to this or any of my comments on the story, I really wanted to help you there that's all. I'm not tryna act rudely in the comment sections.

sorceryofdying

@Theflauntist Ahh, now i get it, the mild typa cursing you used in the first chapter is like kinda funny cuz no one's mum says that to their own kids cuz it basically means they call themselves donkey, so I guess like you understand now that it probably doesn't work the way you wanted it to, you can replace it to "Khotea" (donkey)
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Theflauntist

@sorceryofdying If your comments helped me then there is nothing to be angry about
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Chinasaokwuobara

My love, thanks yeah?. 

Chinasaokwuobara

@Theflauntist  Thank you. All the best darling 
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yoursmenacingly

v4v?

yoursmenacingly

While you update chapters, I will be voting for them consistently. Bye!! ✨
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