Thegirlintheredcoat

@Lee_Sapphire of course i remember! She was lovely and we used to talk! I cant believe it, oh my goodness! 

He I don't think you'll remember a fan of yours named MJ.  Well she died. I just found out you and her know each other on wattpad, so yeah :) I'm her friend, and I fanned you! Like MJ said , your story is really good :) so I voted too! 
          

hello
          as a writer, i like to have a few suggestions and beneficial criticism
          it would if you tell me how to make my story 'the emerald' better
          and if it is good, could you please encourage others to read it 
          thanks
          : )

http://www.mrmuscleonline.co.uk/drain/sink_drain.html ???
          
          If you don't have a deadline to hit, go do something else until inspiration hits. If your editor is breathing down your neck...um...panic! ;)

i've got writers block :L any help?xxx

Just so you guys know I am going away for a week so won't be updating, when I get back I am going to ud the perfects and rewrite chapter one! Aurevoir and happy easter!xoxo

@icallringbearer hahhaha, don't worry:)xx

HOLD CRUD, I'm so sorry! I couldn't get online..bah!

Hey, so i just redid and made a new prologue. it has it's own chapter now! It would be much appreciated if your read and voted! Evan if you have read past it i would love for you to read ti!xoxo

okay guys, so i am rewriting the prologue and chapter one, the improvements should be up today tomorrow i will upload chapter 11:)