@Theicereaper
Hi saw that u are reading my story...and u did it in a day I guess…how was it…felt dragging or something that upsets u about the story…woild like yo know a feedback from a new reader…please help me….
@HopelessRomanticPoo It was awesome! I was searching for a book like this from many days. Please do write more
Hey, dear author i am an author like you and I just published my third story. A couple of days ago I saw your profile and thought we should genuinely support each other I don’t need votes and views; my first story crossed 8,000 reads, and I have over 3,000 votes. I just need your feedback, and I will happily provide the same for you.
Hi,
Can you please read only 1 or 2 chapters of this book and continue only if you like it but do give it a chance....i promise you won't regret it....
Aap... yahan?"
He stopped just inches away.
Too close.
Their breaths tangled. Her heart pounded in her ears.
" Akhirkar 6 mahine ki aankh micholi ke baad aap samne he mere..."
"Pahli mulakat yaadgar honi chahiye na jaan...
(leaning in, lips almost touching hers) please don't stop me..."
The first brush of his lips against hers was gentle, almost too gentle for the intensity between them. But the moment he felt the warmth of her lips, the floodgates opened. The kiss deepened - demanding, possessive, and yet tender, as though he was trying to memorize every sensation.
Once he finds her breathless, he left her lips with a pop sound and move little away just to see her now ruined lipstick and flushed chics...
"Roshni...Tum meri ho..."
"Rudra... I..."
https://www.wattpad.com/story/393435757?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Niti_Ink
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MEERA UPDATE!!
Chapter 2 of Meera is now up! Check it out to see how Meera & Arjun end up getting married. Dont forget to leave comments & reach the target.
https://www.wattpad.com/1586514685-%E2%9F%A2%E2%9F%A2-%F0%9D%9F%90-%E2%9F%A3%E2%9F%A3
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