Hey, I just read the new part and I have to say, it's pretty good. I'm especially curious about what you'll do with Y/n having a silent hatred for Celestia. Little tip from one writer to another, don't just have Y/n get over his hatred for Celestia because she acts nice, have him think she's just putting up a front, and have it where the Canterlot wedding is where he finally lets some of that hatred known, then have Celestia redeem herself in his eyes or at least start to redeem herself when she fights with Y/n against Chrysalis. If not, that could be a good thing to do with Shining Armor