TheotherJackson

I want to start writing again…

Hi everyone!

Hi there I published a new book and i was wondering if you could take a moment to check it out and to comment vote and feel free to give me some ideas advice or suggestions https://www.wattpad.com/story/374372761?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=90sskiddd

Is there any helpers that can help me write this one night stand on my new book 

Janet, a college student, found herself sharing a dorm room with Tamar, a friendly roommate who quickly became her close friend. Little did Tamar know, Janet harbored a secret love for her older sister, Toni. To avoid any complications, the two friends agreed on a single rule - Janet couldn't date Toni. 
          
          Against all odds, fate brought Janet and Toni together one unforgettable night. In a spontaneous moment of passion, they shared a one-night stand, unaware of each other's identities in the heat of the moment. As dawn broke, they realized the truth and tried to distance themselves from the forbidden encounter.
          
          Despite their best efforts to keep their tryst hidden from Tamar, secrets have a way of surfacing. The tension and desire between Janet and Toni only intensified as they struggled to conceal their forbidden attraction. The delicate balance between love, friendship, and loyalty was put to the test as they navigated the aftermath of their impulsive night together.
          
          
          
          
          
          Story idea yes or no?

Journey towards love 
                          Or
          The kill 
          
          
          You can only have one which story?

Joni one shots book should I? Just to get my flow back

What happened to Jujubees bestie????

I might update some more today…

Update anyone? 
          
          Need something to read