Hey! Thank you so much, I'm really glad people are still enjoying my stories!! Unfortunately I don't write anymore, and I'm not planning to start again any time soon since I'm finishing my degree his year. But I agree, I bet it'd be a great story!
If you want to improve your writing, all I can say is you need to practice! Really I'm not the best writer out there but I found I improved a lot as I wrote more and more. I had a look at the chapter you have posted, and I think it's a good concept. I'd recommend you work on your grammar and if you wanted to you could fill it out a little more. Give us some details from Noah's pov when he fought the career, tell us about the reaping and the parade and the start of the games. I hope that helps, and good luck!
