@ThicThighsWiggas
Yo, you probably don't remember my comment since it's been months but I just wanted to say that I see improvement in your writing style, you're doing good so far, keep going
@JZJackalJ Glad to know I was memorable, I'll be on Wattpad a lil more from now on and making my own story on paper before I start posting again, hit me up if you ever think you need advice
Are you okay or at least alive Bro...I'm really worried about you...
@ThicThighsWiggas sorry for the late answer wattpad just doesn't give me any more notifications
So someone read my story and I kept getting notifications that they voted on chapters and I’m like cool cool, then I saw that they added it to the library called “lu et pas accrocher” and I didn’t know what it meant so I translated it thinking it was something else but I was wrong it translated to “read it and didn’t like it” my heart was shattered so please if you have any criticism let me know I wish to make my chapters better for everyone and pleasing to you guys. Love yall stay safe
@ThicThighsWiggas My bad, alot of things happened in 2025 and I haven't been on Wattpad for almost 7 months, even if their's no point anymore, I get what you're saying, it's hard to draw lines in certain stories when it comes to placement and an approach, do what you do, wait a while, look back on it and improve, you have the skill, heart and drive, you just gotta apply, really like your MHA story all things considered, hoping for more updates on it
Firstly, I really appreciate you taking your time to write me feedback
Secondly, when it comes to the seriousness I totally understand that, that’s actually why I introduced the league, stain, and overhaul in recent chapters I have an idea on what’s that gonna be. I don’t always want it to be shits and giggles you know?
Finally, I wasn’t gonna do this but reading your feedback I think I have to now. I’m gonna fix chapters 1-14. When you look back it, it kinda looks like it’s all over the place, because I did make those chapters when I was a freshman and new readers could lose interest quick. I’m not messing up the lore or anything but I wanna take the phrase “let’s make things interesting” and introduce that shit
Hey, I'm not sure if you do crossovers, but would it be possible for a "Danny Phantom x hazbin hotel" story.
Hey man! Saw that you read my book, Unknown World, and I was just wondering what you thought about it. I'd love some feedback so I could learn from any mistakes I made.
@xX_Duurp_Xx Thanks, I'm working on lengthening the chapters, and I've done it in some stories, R.I.P. my sleep schedule, but overall, I'm having a great time writing. Once I'm done with "all" my stories, I may or may not quit. Depends on how I feel and how you guys feel, referring to those who read my stories, but all in all, I appreciate you for giving feedback. No one really does that, except my family, but that's them, You're a random stranger online giving me advice, and I thank you. Anyways, the next chapter might not come out for like........a few months, probably next year? I don't know, I'll have to wait and see. That's all I have to say. Sorry for the long ass essay I wrote. Have a blessed day or night!
Honestly I liked it and gotta admit chapter 5 banner kinda shivered my timbers since I was reading it at night but besides that yea the story is great and of course I love how our love interest is Nejire and we were referred to as “human” the only critique I have is I wish the chapters were a bit longer but besides that story’s great
Chapter?
Yo i just wanna let you know that of a rumor of Wattpad deleting on-going story’s but to prevent that is to mark them as complete
Is there a new chapter for your Nejire book because when I saw the announcement and pressed to read i, it shows that there is no new chapter