xX_Duurp_Xx

Hey man! Saw that you read my book, Unknown World, and I was just wondering what you thought about it. I'd love some feedback so I could learn from any mistakes I made.

xX_Duurp_Xx

@xX_Duurp_Xx Thanks, I'm working on lengthening the chapters, and I've done it in some stories, R.I.P. my sleep schedule, but overall, I'm having a great time writing. Once I'm done with "all" my stories, I may or may not quit. Depends on how I feel and how you guys feel, referring to those who read my stories, but all in all, I appreciate you for giving feedback. No one really does that, except my family, but that's them, You're a random stranger online giving me advice, and I thank you. Anyways, the next chapter might not come out for like........a few months, probably next year? I don't know, I'll have to wait and see. That's all I have to say. Sorry for the long ass essay I wrote. Have a blessed day or night!
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ThicThighsWiggas

Honestly I liked it and gotta admit chapter 5 banner kinda shivered my timbers since I was reading it at night but besides that yea the story is great and of course I love how our love interest is Nejire and we were referred to as “human” the only critique I have is I wish the chapters were a bit longer but besides that story’s great
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