ThierryShadow98

Hey girl. finally got up 2 readin ur story. Think u could use some editing, like putting shwn instead of shawn and such.

@danielleb333 sure
          

heyy I was wondering if you wernt too busy then you could check out some of my stories? id love some feedback on either hush or innocent eyes :) but any comments are good for me:D

Hi, thanks for fanning, you now have an orange ape for company; please keep a banana on you at all times.
          I hope you enjoy anything of mine you happen to read and I’m always eternally grateful for any feedback in the form of comments, critique, pointing out of minor errors or (if you really enjoy what you have read) the odd vote! 
          Cheers, Gav

Here's my site: http://rielapolliebooks.webs.com/
          
          Leave a comment any where and remember to read the homepage! :D

Attention all fans I will be deleting some of my stories like what he did to her and I was better off a nobody  If anybody would like me to keep them ask me and I will but if anybody has ideas for a new story I could right please don't be shy

Chapter 3 page 3

Aww thanks, and I hope you like it =)

Thanks!! =) I really appreciate it. And just to let you know, its not very long. I only have the prologue and the first two chapters up. I'm working on chapter 3 as we speak =)

I love them too!!! And I will try to keep reading, but sadly I am short on time because I am trying to write my own story and it seriously needs some attention at the moment. But during my free time, when I am not writing, I will try to read some more. =) and if you ever want a mystery/thriller type story to read, check mine out!! i would love the feedback. I really didn't mean to advertise there..sorry it just came out.