Hi! Hi! Thank you very very much for critiquing my story! :D It made my day! And I agree with almost everything you said. And thank you for letting me know what it really sounded like! :D I was laughing reading your comments, because they let me know what a mess I was making of the story, while I was busy thinking that it made soo much sense! Okay, I'm blabbering. I am reading your story now and I may take sometime. But I loved reading it, so far ! :D THANK YOU, Again!! :D