This_one_humanperson

I'm gonna rewrite Fear I Follow, just because when I started writing it, I didn't really have a vision for it. But luckily now I do so I'm fix everything and make it better.

This_one_humanperson

I've been working on the two books during lunch breaks but lately it's been freaking cold so my fingers were getting numb. Then today it snowed so much and a big cherry on top was the freaking wind blowing ice in my face! But I'm slowly getting finished so that's good for everyone.

This_one_humanperson

@This_one_humanperson I live in a desert but the school I go to is in a cold place so I'm not used to this :(
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Always_the_late_one

Just how middle of nowhere you live? Haha (the joke is I live in Finland and that sounds like the weather here so I’m kinda in middle of nowhere too)
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This_one_humanperson

I've been thinking, are any of my book characters Ocs or readers cause this is my first time doing this. Someone I know said it wasn't a reader so I'm wondering if I should change to an Oc?

This_one_humanperson

@This_one_humanperson So Azubah is kinda like an Oc that you can make more relatable? I don't know if Yukio is since he has parents and stuff plus they both have a backstories?
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Always_the_late_one

In my opinion i like “readers” more bc it gives the freedom to make up little things about them like their fav color, fav food ect. and make the characters feel more relatable. Ofc I never think of y/n as myself bc how the characters act and thinks like are different based on who wrote them. 
            
            So like i like Ocs with the freedom to feel relatable? ʕʘ‿ʘʔ
            
            This is only my opinion so you don’t need to listen to me ( ・∇・)
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This_one_humanperson

Does anyone have suggestions to improve Azubah's demon form?

Lemonsagex_x

@This_one_humanperson alrighty glad I was able to help in some way!
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This_one_humanperson

@Lemonsagex_x I can add small horns but I don't think I can switch her to a mouse because then I'll have change some parts in the book.
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Lemonsagex_x

@This_one_humanperson  perhaps it could be similar to a mouse, considering how jumpy they are? And she's the avatar of fear. Other than that I feel like she should have small horns.
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