Theiconicstoryteller

Yo, can you read my story elements 12? I want opinions so I can improve
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395932837?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Theiconicstoryteller

ThisisDejehh

@Theiconicstoryteller sure. add me on discord. I'll send my feedback there. @thisisdejay
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mazarbul

Thanks for checking out Starsplitter! ^_^ I hope you had a good time! Excited to read Sunset Crusaders, it looks great.

mazarbul

@ThisisDejehh oh I see! Same here, I find present-tense very satisfying to read in and to write :)
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ThisisDejehh

@mazarbul thanks! i love present-tense writing that's why i was intrigued by how u wrote it.
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