I like the added info about yourself.
"Let it flood, let it flood. Can't hold it back anymore. Let it flood, let it flood turn away and close the door.....Let the storm rage on God's got a plan for me anyway." :P
Never tell Natalie what I told you about the story. Silence or I will have to kill you! *spoken with a squeaky accent* JK!! But seriously...don't tell her.