Thorumwlw

Merry Christmas everybody, may happiness be with you all today during this day!

Thorumwlw

omg I just realized what the hell I've written. Grammar and logic go boom after a 6500-word chapter.
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Thorumwlw

Merry Christmas everybody, may happiness be with you all today during this day!

Thorumwlw

omg I just realized what the hell I've written. Grammar and logic go boom after a 6500-word chapter.
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Thorumwlw

Alright, the first chapter has been edited, a few more touches and tension

Thorumwlw

@ Thorumwlw  it's alright 
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ALPbooks

@Thorumwlw sorry for the comment on that chapter lol, caught in the moment, I'll watch it from now on! Didn't realise it would possibly ruin it for others:)
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Thorumwlw

Alright, because I considered the chapters before the time skip slightly rushed, I decided to rewrite most of them. So if you perhaps want to see some bonus lines, especially more closure between Vanya and her Cosima,  you can always throw a look there,

Thorumwlw

The changes will stop at chapter 16(not including it)
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