_abhipreeti_

Hi there, I am your judge for the Best First Line/Paragraph category in the Aether Mini Awards and I just wanted to inform that I have few questions regarding the judging rubrics of this category given by the community (you can check my queries in the "Judging Criteria" chapter of the award book) and unless I receive an answer or a possible solution from the community/hosts, the judging might be delayed a bit (but it perhaps shouldn't take much time; depends purely on the answer from the community).
          
          As you are one of the participants, I thought I should let you know. 
          
          Thank you. 

Thundercloud_E

Thanks for the update!
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Thundercloud_E

Hello everyone, I just realized I forgot to plant the seeds for an upcoming scene in one of the next chapters of Malora. I went ahead and added in a small bit of dialogue into chapter 8 to address this so that there are no plot holes surrounding this scene.

hjyi04

Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!

Thundercloud_E

Sure, go ahead. I don’t mind. Criticism is appreciated.
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