Hey, I was excited to find more Louis Tomlinson fan fictions(I love him:) and even more excited to find my name as like the first word. I think that was fate telling me I needed to read it(: My name's Ally, btw. I haven't gotten past the first page yet, I'm working on my own story, a Larry fic called Unraveling Louis, that I wanted to ask if you'd give a try. If not, that's cool, I understand. Not every 1D fan is a Larry shipper, but anyway, that's it I guess. ciao:p
Oh, and good luck writing!