Beauvear

Hello! I hope you are doing well... 
          
          Sorry for plugging in without your permission, you can delete this lang din if you insist. 
          
          I just want to share my first ever fantasy story entitled: "Veiled Secrets", and it is still ongoing. I want to receive feedbacks about my book overall as it can help me grow as a writer. 
          
          If you have time, will you give a chance to read it?
          
          Here's the story link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/373700034-veiled-secrets