TicciShadow

I am going to try and read and help people write poems, stories, short stories- anything! I have been asked to help with poems and I just want to announce that I will do that and stories!!! So yeah!

Dawn_the_wolf-69

My names dawn, nice to meet you!

Shadow_Reaper-69

Blah blah, bleh~
            IDC, and you better follow them their awesome!!
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-The_V0ID-

Shades, calm Down. you need to stop saying that, I feel like you are getting out of hand. I followed them so can you leave me alone?
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Shadow_Reaper-69

YOUR NAME IS SHADOW TOO!?@shadow_wolf-69  WE HAVE A NEW GANG MEMBER!!!!!
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TsisterT

Hi guyssss... Gusto nyo bang magbasa ng poems kung ako senyo guys basahin nyo na ung verses by neth-neth_11...as in guys solid ang galing nya siguro ung iba makakarelate sa poem nya...basta basahin nyo ang ganda pakirecommend nadin po sa iba salamat
          Here's the link..
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/236089317?utm_medium=link&utm_source=android&utm_content=share_reading
          
          
          Hope you'll read verses...
          Thank you!!!

s192837465s

Hey there! I really like how your poems often build up in suspense and then end with a twist. Just a fun fact, I also like DDLC and MatPat (I once binge-watched every single episode about DDLD in GT, even the livestreams) and I hope that we can get along :)
          
          Stay safe,
          Panthea Zhou

s192837465s

By the way, if it isn't a problem, could you give me some advice on how to improve my poems? 
            
            Here's the link: https://www.wattpad.com/876120639-a-treasury-of-poems-afterglow-introduction
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Abicadabra1

Hi TicciShadow! I read a couple of your poems and I was wondering if you could critique mine? I am a new author and wanted to see if you had any tips for improvement. 
          I understand if this is not something you are prepared to do, but I hope that maybe you can find the time to read a couple. 
          
          Ab19a1l 
          
          P.s my poems can be found on my profile. 
          
          Thank you so much. 

Abicadabra1

Thank you so much  
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TicciShadow

@Ab19a1l sure! Always willing to help!
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