Gwenn2891
Hi, I just read your comments on my work Talvi.
Thank you very much for giving your constructive opinion. This is my very first work and I was posting for family and friends to enjoy. ☺️ (objectivity ) I didn’t know all I know now about writing and I’m doing my best to improve. This is kinda first draft ♀️ to see what others would think of my ideas, writing…
I’m sure the more you’re gonna read the more you’ll find (maybe or maybe not) incoherent scenes, lacking of description, depth…PLEASE, do not hesitate to tell me! I really appreciate it when people tell me the good and bad in the story, this way I’ll know what to improve.
THANK YOU again for reading Talvi, I hope you won’t be disappointed☺️
Gwenn2891
Tigerlion78
And hey, maybe check out some of the stuff I have written and review it as well. I really do enjoy looking and reviewing other's stuff for the fun of it, but I do have the inherent ulterior motive of getting more eyes on my work. No pressure though.
Tigerlion78
@Gwenn2891 Sure no problem. I've been writing for a while and I definitely still have some problems with incoherency, but I definitely will not hesitate to point it out. It looks like you got a good story going and I'll be sure to hop back on it and give you some more of my opinions. I used to be in a fiction editing club in college so I actually consider this kinda stuff to be a bit fun. Good luck and happy writing!