@sugarstrawberry_ It started off super well! I'm VERY picky about what I read though, my COMPLETELY read stories are on my second reading list. Your story started out super well, it was really similar to a story Ive read before, although it didn't feel like it was going much of anywhere. I see now that you've discontinued it and started other works. I can give my thoughts on those ones as well if you'd like. So sorry for the late response X,X going thru some stuff rn.