Hey!
First of all, I really like your story! It’s nice and cute. All I want to say is the grammar, please don’t think of me as rude but you might need to improve your grammar and spelling. I would be really happy if you did! That’s all, sorry if it’s short but that’s the only thing i’ve noticed. Keep the good work! ❤️
@ Chataii yeah I know, my spelling is not good, but I am happy that you like it❣, it's my first book and I hope my spelling getting better in my next book, stay safe from the COVID-19