Timacuh Alfonso

hi...
          hope you wouldn't mind reading my work and critique it.
          title: i want you to need me
          http://www.wattpad.com/748186-i-want-you-to-need-me
          tnx...

Hello there :) If may time ka.. please read..
          
          Three words, Eight letters, Say it and I'm yours  :DD wee. hope magustuhan mo!