TimberClarke

@IvoriBonesIvi np it's so much better then my first attempt which I had to delete because of how bad it was

@IvoriBonesIvi it's really good for your first one

Long story short yes

@IvoriBonesIvi not the best I've read, but that's because I've read a lot of fics from more experienced writers, but it's definitely better then what I could write 

@IvoriBonesIvi yup