Incase anyone cares..
I'm almost finished re-reading my story, and my first order of business will be editing chapters with continuity errors (because, apparently, I couldn't keep my story straight).
This includes:
Fixing chapter "We Have Him Where We Want Him", in which Nathaniel's hands go from being tied to untied in the matter of paragraphs (with no explanation, spoooky).
and "Vane's Great Escape", where at the end of the previous chapter a certain someone (no spoilers!) goes from being killed from gunshot wound to the head to, in the chapter listed, dead from a gunshot wound to the chest (my greatest accomplishment-- I actually cringed when I read what dumb thing I had managed to do).
Anyway, if any of my old readers remembers any other continuity errors (small or big), please let me know so I can fix them accordingly and overall improve my story as a whole!
Thank you!!