TiredLock

I have a question for everybody and anybody who sees this
          	 if a prisoner has a life sentence and their heart stopped and the doctors dubbed them dead then they miraculously came back to life would you consider this prisoners life sentence served and release them or say they were never dead and keep them in prison
          	 put your answers below

Monkey3619

Hey! So, I love your books, especially the concepts they are based around. However, one thing that makes your books kind of hard to read are the major gramatical errors(too long of sentences, talking without quotations, spots where paragraphs should and shouldnt be broken up). Now, i am not trying to be annoying or super picky, im just trying to get people to give a little bit more love to your books. Going through and fixing the major mistakes is a great way to get more people to read your books. I hope this helped, and that you have a great night. 

TiredLock

@Monkey3619  Thank you I really enjoyed reading this and for anybody who doesn't know this is what constructive criticism looks like
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TiredLock

I have a question for everybody and anybody who sees this
           if a prisoner has a life sentence and their heart stopped and the doctors dubbed them dead then they miraculously came back to life would you consider this prisoners life sentence served and release them or say they were never dead and keep them in prison
           put your answers below