Hey! So, I love your books, especially the concepts they are based around. However, one thing that makes your books kind of hard to read are the major gramatical errors(too long of sentences, talking without quotations, spots where paragraphs should and shouldnt be broken up). Now, i am not trying to be annoying or super picky, im just trying to get people to give a little bit more love to your books. Going through and fixing the major mistakes is a great way to get more people to read your books. I hope this helped, and that you have a great night.