@n_alice14111 Sorry for the late reply. I haven't taken reading request since January and never realized I still had request.
I read Hidden Behind The Eyes. That summary you wrote is amazing. It just started so I'm not sure where the story will go next but it seems good.
As for Moving On, the beginning had a bit too much info that I feel like some readers will skip over since it isn't useful, but you started with short chapters so it helped.
And out of nowhere you added a fantasy theme which was interesting! I'm not sure the plot though; you have enough time to slowly add it though so you're find^^
Take care and good luck