@Tlkalot1 Hi, I read the first part of your story. I really like the plot of it so far! I like how you've pictured Lavellan's origin and how Solas knew of her. There are a few things that I have opinions and constructive criticism about, if you want to I can share them with you. You are welcome to do the same for me. Do you have Discord? We could talk more on there, I don't know if Wattpad has a personal messaging thing.