Pikachu

Does anyone have some tips on writing. I saw that it said my writing is more literary. But would that effect the appeal of it? I want it to be a fun little experience. But at the same time i want it to be descriptive so you really get a picture. So i'm in a bit of a pickle. Might i have some help?

You need to post more often.

Soo.....Question of the Month!
          
          
          What is your favorite color?

hi

I'M NOT WRITING FOR A WHILE IM BUSY READING YOAI AND STUFF!

Wassup bitch face

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