Toilet Gloop

Your arcane book is awesome I hope you update it soon 

Yo you alright

Hey everybody, I apologize for the most recent chapter of Nemesis to All being so late, I had to get my wisdom teeth removed, all four. I thought I'd have some time to write but it's hard to think with icepacks and pain in your mouth. Either way, I hope you enjoy the most recent chapter! Let me know if my writing style can use any touch-ups (I feel like I repeat certain keywords too many times), and don't worry about those waiting for other books, the wrapping up for Nemesis to All is soon at hand. I can't wait to show you all the ideas I have for my other books.

Hey, I just found out about your account through Extinction Event and I was wondering if you are still currently updating it, or if you’re focusing on other books rn?

Also, Idk if its just that I haven't been on Wattpad in a while but my crap is glitching out like crazy, like there are no more little orange dots next to my notifications or nothing. Maybe its just that my computer can't compute Wattpad or what, but its the little things that are odd for me.

Holy Guacamole, will you look at the time.
          
          Hey everyone! It's been waaayyyyy too long.
          
          I've delivered you a Nemesis to All chapter that is way too overdue. If you've stuck to it long enough, I hope you can see my improvement as a writer. Being my first "book" I've ever written (I haven't done anything like this before), it's going to have a decent amount of mistakes. I just want to say thank you to those who have stuck around for the whole journey.
          
          Now, as to why I haven't written in so long. School's been giving me the 1-2 with AP classes and all, along with having barely any time to write when I got home. Going to the gym and my other hobbies took precedence over writing, sadly. Thankfully now, my racing season is over, along with my hockey season ending, so I should have a lot more time to formulate my stories and write them.
          
          I won't keep this too long, but do you think I should do an overall review of "Nemesis to All"? Like, changing the title, certain chapters, etc. I know I probably ask that a lot, I just want to give you guys the best experience.
          
          Overall, I'm glad to be back. I also joined this teen writers guild in school that might take up a decent chunk of my writing time, but I'm hoping to finish "Nemesis to All" very soon, which is why some of my other books will be put to the back for now.
          
          Thank you once again for allowing me to be your writer. I read all of your comments, luv u guys <3

So my first half or so chapters needed grammar checks badly. Something I realize is:
          
          For some reason I think towards sounds the same as toward, that had to be the most spellcheck. Also, I include "had" in moments that didn't need it.
          
          Also, thank god Grammarly is a thing. Definitely, something you want to get if you want to get into writing, it'll save your ass. 
          
          Don't know how you guys read through some of the confusing stuff, but thanks for sticking around. My writing evolves every week (I think), so more, better content should be pumped out with my advancing (but still needs a lot of work) writing skills.

A quarter of the way done the chapter for dbd, but holy hell they're going to be adding alien!
          
          Also, I believe I need to go through my chapter for nemesis to all again. It has come to my attention that there are a lot of spellchecks, and personally, for me spellcheck can make or breaks books if there is a lot of them. So don't be alarmed if you see it updating or anything.

Geez, I finally got out of the chapter. Sorry everyone, rough week with work and the heat and all that. I hope the chapter doesn't seem rushed or anything, always open to someone telling me if I messed up somewhere and what I can fix. Anyway, I'll be working on the next DBD chapter for a while if I want it as long as the first chapter.
          
          As for the poll thing I tried doing, I only got one vote lol (Thank you to the one person, big preesh). I realize I'm probably going to have to wait to do polls until it the book gets more traction. All I see for DBD out there anyone is one shots so we'll have to see where it goes.
          
          Stay hydrated out there folks, its getting rough. <3

Chapters comin a little late this week, really busy with work due to carnivals and all that and working on other things once I got home, it'll be out soon enough.