DJS1969

Really, really good. I'm zooming through chapters because my eyes aren't snagging on writing errors. The story is rich in description, detail, and adventure. The overall voice tone is true to the era. Great job.

DJS1969

@jillstroud That's swell if you do read mine, but no problem if you don't. I get how absorbing it is to be in the middle of composing. And I understand how sometimes you want to follow for other reasons if the other writer's genre or story isn't your cup of tea. I joined Wattpad a while ago, but have been active only recently. My motive was to see if my story would appeal spontaneously to real-life readers and find my audience, not so much beta-readers or other writers. I did browse around, though, in hopes of finding other writers in it for the art and craft of storytelling that I can follow with interest. Nice to know they're out there.
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Tokarski21

@jillstroud Thanks so much.  It really means a lot to hear that the story is engaging you.  It's sometimes hard to know if I'm on the right track.  Looking forward to jumping into your book.
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