Grizzly2001
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Okay so it's 3:33 AM and I'm reading daddy's girl chapter Time to forget and I'm about to kill you with my words because this is the most fucked up thing I've read out of the 10 years I've been able to read (I'm 16) and I just want to say this chapter needs to be 're wrote because (SPOILERS IF YOU HAVENT READ THEBOOK/CHAPTR) luke called his friend to come get his daughter he hasn't seen in 7months or more carrots blue into his room while she's asleep ties her up and was going to rape her witch should never be written about in less you telling your rape story then she wakes up tells him to stop he ignores her and as soon as he kisses her she's okay with it? Like no what in the he'll was going through your head when you wrote this???? I know 15-16-17 year old boys who read fan fits to get ideas as to what things to try with their girlfriends or boyfriends and what if some little boy read this and though it was okay to rape.someone because the missed them or "loves them" I've personally been a victim of sexual adult and it's not fun at all so I hope I've killed you in the inside with my words other than this I love your book so far XOXO-Grizzly2001