TomHollandstan18

TomHollandstan18

Thank you so much for the feedback! I will definitely make sure to use less paragraphs (it’s kind of a habit because I used to use none ahha) but thank you so much!!  <33
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TomHollandSeries3000

@ TomHollandstan18  it is amazing! Maybe you could make little less paragraphs. Bc now you have blank line after almost every sentence. Unique story, loads of details that love! It's really well written! Good job
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