TomandJerryfan2009

Hey have you thought of doing a rewrite of ‘Never judge a hyena by its spot’ where when Kion encounters Jasiri not only tells him about ‘Sisi ni Sawa’ and opens his mind about how there are good hyenas but also tells him about the political corruption in the system and portrays Simba as a tyrant in the and how it starves the Outlanders, even those who don’t attack the Pridelands like her family. Kion doesn’t believe at first but later on in later epsiodes Kion, Bunga, Fuli, Besthe and Ono had begun to notice some cracks in the system he and the Guard swore to serve, but what really stood out was at the savanna summit when Simba invited Makuu which convinced him and the Lion Guard that his father and the Pridelands is corrupt and thus begins to secretly work with Jasiri and her clan to build an army of Outlanders (except Zira and her Pride of course) and renegade Pridelanders to stage a revolution.

Do you know what I think Makuu deserves? Exile from the Pridelandsor better yet an execution.

What do you think will happen in the second act? I would like to hear theories.

New chapter of Janja’s new crew rewritten is out

I read your version of Janja’s new crew and it’s good I admit that, but as an honest opinion it would seem better if Kion, Bunga, Fuli, Besthe and Ono turn against Simba and his Pride in secret when they learn that the Pride was responsible for the deaths of Jasiri’s older clan members and they side with Janja and Jasiri to plan a revolution to overthrow him by gathering the other Outlanders, with the exception of Zira and her Pride, who have fallen victim to this injustice inflicted by the Pridelands. However this is just an opinion though, as this is your story only you can decide what happens.

My first story is now out

So what would your opinion on the Outlanders be in my story ‘Lion Guard: March of the Demons’ be in comparison to the canon Lion Guard show?

What was your opinion on the chapter ‘back in the Outlands, especially with the part with Janja, Reirei, Kiburi and Mzingo flashbacks.

Do you think my story. The Lion Guard: March of the Demons, is worthy of a comic on devaintart?

Also, in regards to my story, unlike with the whole season of the Lion Guard, especially season 3 this would explore into the concepts of betrayal, political corruption, oppression, persecution, the status quo, redemption, the perception of good and evil and rebellion against injustice. Some concepts which I’m pretty sure we have noticed within season 1 and early season 2 of the Lion Guard.
          
          Not only will the story explore the Outlander’s redemption arc from that of villains/misunderstood heroes to reformed villains/fully understood heroes, but also the Kion, Bunga, Fuli, Besthe and Ono’s transformation from obedient and loyal supporters of Simba’s reign as well as the current legal system in the Pridelands that we have seen in the show to Jasiri and the Outlanders greatest allies when they finally acknowledge the corruption and the flaws within their kingdom and become actual warriors who won’t backdown to any form of tyranny to protect the freedom of living creatures and the belief of the circle of life (This is foreshadowed in the trailer).