My name is Tommy B. and I have been trying to promote my new shot story series, The Adventures of Jason Bagel. Jason Bagel started when my teacher told us to write a story about a mission to mars. To be honest i didn't care so I thought of the most ridiculously dumb thing I could think of, a kid that won a danimals contest and moved to mars. of course I got a D. But one night I decided to write something serious with Jason Bagel. so I handed that in for a contest. I did not win. not even top 5. out of 8 stories. but I want to know what you think am I wasting my time or should I keep doing it. ANY comments suggestion fanmail/hatemail send to tommybachelder@gmail.com. I want your feed back please!!!
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- JoinedJune 15, 2015
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In April of 2025 thirteen year old Jason bagel Won a Danimals sweepstakes contest. His prize An all expense p...
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