SilverLove

Hey there! I was wondering when you have the time can you please read a story of mine? Here’s one that I need some criticism on: 
          A New Maid And a Beautiful Bachelor Don’t mix!: romance/humor/ drama
          Evett Castillo finds herself working for one of the most handsome bachelor in England. The only problem though is the fact that he takes pride in making her life a living hell. 
          It would make my day if you could comment on how it is :) 
          Thank you, 
          -Silverlove

ann_o_nemos

Could you read my newest story? “I’m Body Guarding the President’s Jerk Son…Who is HOT! FML”. Comment and vote plz!
          
          Carly Dupont is not a normal seventeen-year-old girl. She works for her dad in his freelance organization called COBRA as a bodyguard. She trains hard and shuts everyone out of her world. After her mom’s death years ago, she’s never let anyone else in. 
          
          Her training is complete and her dad sends her off to be the bodyguard to the President’s son. She hasn’t seen him since she was seven, and like any jerk, he used to torment her with petty little tricks. But now she’s back and she’s stronger, faster, better.
          
          Yet he still has the inexplicable ability to make her feel like the weak little girl she used to be. Could he be the one to break her invisible wall?
          
          Welcome to her world of fists, politicians, assassins, high school, and even possible romance.
          

maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls-chapter-1

Undescribable

Hey! I was wondering if you would check out a few of my stories or a piece of poetry; if you have time. If you enjoy it maybe become a fan. Comment on your opinion tho. because I would love to hear it. It would mean a lot to me. Thanks! 
          
          Have a great day. 
          
          <3 ~Undescribable~ ~Faith~ <3 xo
          
          
          I love your page and your about me! It's awesome!!!