I had some relaxing time and read the first few chapters. You have a good story going but one thing I'm going to suggest is adding a little more description. While you guys have brought the characters to life with a lot of descriptions, just the setting seems to lack a tinny bit. Just when describing your character's surrounding make sure to make the description colorful, the setting in which your story is set in is equally as important as the characters. But definitely a great story with a lot of potential.
