ToniLangdon

@snowball456 your welcome thankyou for the follow :)

oliviarose85

All done?

ToniLangdon

@oliviarose85 okay cool
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oliviarose85

If it helps, more will be added to the kidnapping and I'll have to write Charlie in to the rest of the book.
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ToniLangdon

@oliviarose85 yeah all finish, I loved both book and didn't want it to finish
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oliviarose85

Thanks for the follow! I hope you're enjoying CL. You've made a switch over to from the second draft (new chapters extending the beginning) the first draft, so let me know if certain things don't add up between the two.

ToniLangdon

@oliviarose85 ahhh I see now and it's fine I can look past all that I'm sure it all make some sense :)
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oliviarose85

elephant in the room chapter was the first chapter of the first draft. Everything before that was what I added on later on (second draft). So it gets a bit messy now.
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ToniLangdon

@oliviarose85 I'm so confused, what do you mean?
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oliviarose85

Just for a heads up, C.L. is a little messy and unedited right now. It's not terribly messy, just not exactly where it needs to be.

ToniLangdon

@oliviarose85 that's fine I don't mind I'm sure it is just as good as the first :)
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