This is the chapter I’ve previewed for people the most
Reviews for it have included:
“That gave me chills”
“That’s tight”
and perhaps the most flattering compliment after I told someone I may change things in the revision process
“Well, whatever you do, please don’t change that chapter at all. It’s perfect.”
And I promise those weren’t from my mom.
It embodies a lot of what the story is about. If ‘Dezu’ was a movie, this would be the trailer, without a doubt.
Check out “Born of Fire and Moonlight”
in my book
“The Cinders of Dezu”