@TonyBradbury
What army are you in warhammer?
@BodyInTheWall don't actually play just love the fluff and a big follower of the novels esp anything Wolves connected thought Prospero Burns was an excellent novel would have worked even if not connected to the Black Library got into it trouh the Ghost Novels
Thanks for adding Ripper to your list!
@BodyInTheWall no problem works well but as you said the ending is a bit rushed ....any way you would do a re-write
Thanks for adding Random Writing Tips to your reading list. I hope you find it useful.
